Celebrating My Success

one lonely night

WALT:  Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers

One lonely day the was a stomp on the ground then the chair was moving ow no then i sure some one coming

What are we going to do then i sure the person
the were in a hospital bed was the cry nose it and
girl with a cut in the leg

We need a first aid kit i look like a hospital  the
could be a first aid here then fight maybe not it’s
a really old hospital so i don’t think you will

but the the girl stranded up and looked
like a Zomba so I ran away screaming the hall
down want are we going to do maybe we could
stop screaming first and plan it before we do any
think

else

SELF ASSESSMENT

Making sure that it is the right place.  making sure that it makes sense.

Pair assessment

You need to work on re reading it to make it make sense and some punctuation

I like how you used a capital letter for the start of the sentence.

descriptive writing

This week for writing Mrs Clark gave us a task about frogs and alligators. We had to put the thing that are common with both in the middle. And things that are not come with each other  on the sides.
we had to put it in the right place to no what is different to them both this as a fun activity to do for literacy  maybe I could try some new animals.
 

plastic bags

Plastic bags

1.Should plastic be banned

2. And why

3. because there fly and get stuck.

4.Here is another resin

There get in the water and there get current with the fish and the other sea animals

       

claude monet

This week we have been lurning about an artist I chose Claude  Monet because he is my group name he has painted lots of paintings

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2nd August 2017

Greymouth

Dear Zyah,

I think you should play netball because this game is going to be good fun.

It will make you have good catching and throwing skills with a

ball.

When you are running around playing netball it also keeps you fit and healthy.  It will help you improve your shooting skills.

It is a nice game to play when it is sunny. Maybe You should play           netball    

Want you need

how to play netball

netball dress

netball shoes

netball ball

cross cants

Cross country

On Monday we had cross count.. I came 6th place we all tried are hardest to come

1st but Honor came

1st but I'm going to kamara i'm really excited to go and do it somewhere else at Grey main we had  comes so we can stay in the inside of the cons and we had tyres it was fun run thout them my mum said to go fast i tried but next time I’m going to go fast next time

READING / KVL WALT

WALT:  Use what we already know to make sense of what we read. 
This week I've been  doing reading on bats.   They live in a  roost.
They live for 20 to 40 years. They eat bugs, bananas, frogs they can be friendly and not nice.  We had to record what we knew already about bats and words we thought might be in the book before we read it.  After we read it we had to add more information.  Here is my chart.

Clarice Bean Spells Trouble 40bc

Title: Clarice Bean Spells Trouble  

Author:  Lauren Child

This book is about when she wants to be bad so she can live with her mum. 

You might want to  know why  she is being bad? She wants all the food for  herself  and she says no to dad and yes to mum. She wants to live with  her mum not her dad.